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Open Poetry #47

Oh Wow Oh Wow Oh Wow

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2011-10-31 10:37 AM

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In the end
She is tall

There is a glow
A white nimbus
Around her hair

Her eyes shine
Happy to see me

She is smiling
As if to say

Now really
That wasn’t so bad

.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-10-31 10:44 AM

I quite understand.

~*~ The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon,
but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes ~*~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2011-10-31 10:50 AM

and then I pay for my haircut, and walk out the door...

Sorry, my friend, just couldn't resist! I agree with Jerry - well done.

j.

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 2011-10-31 11:12 AM

According to his sister, as Steve Jobs lay dying he looked past his family as if into space, and spoke his last words. "OH WOW, OH WOW, OH WOW"

eerie, no?

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2011-10-31 11:51 AM

Enjoyed the poem,
and the responses, John.

Thank you!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2011-11-01 02:53 AM

The title sums up this poem,John.
ida

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2011-11-04 10:54 PM

Enjoyed the read.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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