Open Poetry #47 |
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a woman's face wears many masks |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA ![]() |
a woman's face wears many masks her precious secrets to conceal so a man may sit and ponder if what he sees is truely real he's a very clear-headed man who takes his time and sets his goal he's sure to see the masks diverge as he taps on the door to her soul There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Absolutely! Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a Very Special Message! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Opposites attract we have been told / Yin & Yang Welcome . . . ~ Intolerant people are the people who do not believe the way we want them to, |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Thank you, Sunshine. That was such a wonderful surprise. I loved the e-card and your warm welcoming. There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
JerryPat-Thank you for taking the time to comment on my poem and for your welcoming. I appreciate that! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nice to see you, faithmairee> Judging by this poem and your pleasant personality, you are a welcome addition to our little home ![]() |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Thank you, Balladeer for your wonderful remarks. It is great being here! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I think there's still a few of those men around ![]() |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Rex, thank you for commenting on my poem. I appreciate that. There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nicely constructed image of a mature man attracted to a woman and the woman's slow release to his advances. Well done! Welcome here and enjoy yourself it's a great spot. Eric ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Eric...thank you so much for your wonderful remarks. You made my heart smile! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice entrance ![]() welcome to PIP |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Well done. Thank you for sharing and welcome. Alison |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms faith...welcome..your observations are accurate I think...and the masks are sometimes covered with the sincerest of skin. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
An exquisite little gem. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Excellent write! Welcome! Lori |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
I love the title! Welcome to PIP. Your first stanza has such truth, and your second stanza describes a kind of man thats hard to come by. Wonderfully done. Enjoyed. -Trina. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Thank you all for the warm welcoming and all of your wonderful remarks. I am looking forward to getting to know you and reading your work as well. There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
First, welcome...this is a good place to both come to and come back to...now your write...loved the title (what drew me in to read it...and glad I did)...and my favorite lines were "he's sure to see the masks diverge as he taps on the door to her soul" ...an excellent conclusion to a lovely write |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Thank you for your wonderful welcoming. I've only been here a few days but I love it here already. Thank you also for your lovely comments about my poem. I appreciate them so much. Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Welcome,a very good post. latearrival |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Thank you for the lovely welcome and for your wonderful remark about my poem. Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Welcome to Passions. (Beware of Balladeer, he has bugs) and he's mean and cruel and he's also pretty homely. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Thank you for the welcoming...now about that warning...are they cooties? There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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