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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-10-29 07:34 AM




Late last night
I was being naughty
to my body
with chocolate truffles'
creamy indulgence
and sweet centered delight
I savored every suck of my tongue
on the melting confection
taking it slow trying to make it last
I found my thoughts going
a different direction
with this sweet
I thought of a special way
I might employ
to share it with you
in a way you'd enjoy
But just how and where
I won't say...


LGR(C)10/29/11


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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-10-29 07:42 AM


It is strange how our thoughts process in the directions that they do when we are in ecstasy of however sort.

~*  The sound of a kiss is not so loud as that of a cannon, but its echo lasts a great deal longer.--Oliver Wendell Holmes  ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2011-10-29 08:07 AM


chocolate mmmmm, I'm crazy about it!
Thanks Jerry

Lori

jwesley
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3 posted 2011-10-29 09:56 AM


Tease!  (In a lovely way, of course!)

j.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2011-10-29 12:15 PM


Of course

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Margherita
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5 posted 2011-10-29 12:27 PM


I am totally with you in this slow conscious savoring, dear Lori! I had my daily dose already so I better do not indulge ... in imaginations.

Very nice and stirring.

Love,
Margherita

Michael
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6 posted 2011-10-29 03:13 PM


...and so much said in what you didn't say.  One should never underestimate the power of chocolate!


Well done.
Michael

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2011-10-29 05:39 PM


Margerhita and Michael! I seriously believe the Garden of Eden had a chocolate tree!

Lori

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8 posted 2011-10-30 07:56 PM


Yums!!! LOL
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