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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-10-27 08:47 AM




I see my reflection
in your eyes
I can’t help but believe
your vision
of that someone
I aspire to be
It is true
You bring out
the best in me

LGR©10/27/11

© Copyright 2011 Lori Grosser Rhoden - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2011-10-27 09:00 AM


visions are merely the true you
they point the way what you can do
you, alone, are your best friend,
your talent and verve will blend
the smile that is forthcoming
is your own reflection . . . stunning

~*  If they give you lined paper, write the other way.  ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2011-10-27 09:07 AM


That has got to be one of the nicest things anyone has ever said to me

Lori

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2011-10-27 09:10 AM


Nice things are like found loot, spend it on what's important.

~*  If they give you lined paper, write the other way.  ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2011-10-27 09:25 AM


awe!
Michael
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5 posted 2011-10-28 08:01 PM


A beautiful reflection, Lori.

Much enjoyed.


Michael

JL
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6 posted 2011-10-28 10:10 PM



I see...

Very nice Lori!


JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2011-10-29 06:03 PM


Michael and JL
Thanks for given me the ole looksee!  

Lori

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8 posted 2011-10-30 07:39 PM


You bring out
the best in me

When someone does that, they're a keeper for sure!

ebonygirl
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9 posted 2011-10-30 10:53 PM


WOW, that is wonderful,
ms. e

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