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martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2011-01-23 09:36 AM

Consider this, my love
a God vast and impressive
moving in my life
thinking three moves ahead
in a chess game only he plays

as our lives lay as painted squares
intermingled 8x8
youre homeless
and I, I in no position to accept you
3 weeks sooner and in my bed you'd lay
this moment, this night, this city, this day

in my ,on my, in my heart
you'd lay, in a precarious situation
some call you kurva, others gold-digger
and I think of you
now in that small German border town

my heart distant
eyes tired and heavy
I find peace in the silence
as I ready for bed
you are not here

and nay shall my heart receive
in all your weary ways
I grow wary
and more weary
for you to change your ways

and yet you're drawn to me
in all the gifts I possess
none can be purchased, none sold, or stolen
just a man and a silent heart
locked

and so it remains...

you haven't got a clue

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

1 posted 2011-01-23 09:48 AM

...or, clueless?

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

2 posted 2011-01-23 10:43 AM

Sounds like it is time to move on. Easier said than done sometimes, however. Nice work.

~ Good health is merely the slowest possible rate at which one can die. ~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2011-01-23 11:51 AM

Love this heart rendering tale.
A different slice of life from you, touching and sincere.

Always worth reading, martini man~

The_Doctors_Angel_32
Member

since 2011-01-14

Posts 337
Florida, USA

4 posted 2011-01-23 11:56 AM

Yes, this reminds me of how I felt when I broke it off with my ex. It just did not get the clue that our love was no more. I truly enjoyed the read!!!

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2011-01-24 08:54 AM

Master of the melancholy heart strikes again! This is another good one. You know we're all pulling for you

Lori

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