Open Poetry #47 |
Goat-Footed God of Desire |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Progeny from the loins of Lucifer A goat-footed entrepreneur of slur The Pipes of Pan is lure for Succubus For mere mortal man his allure disgusts. Sybaritic goat with craven cloven hoofs Seduces and takes young lasses as proof Of his hedonistic lifestyle so vile Gutted with desire he oft does beguile. Oh, you hairy-legged beast keep at bay Away from our women you use as prey With that insidious grin you were born From Satan's loins, he did give you a horn One horn, dead center of your evil head Tribute to your bedroom skills it is said The scourge of mankind for lo, all these years Taking these women with your lancing spear. We oft do wonder where our women go Are they bedding the wicked Billygoat? ~* If they give you lined paper, write the other way. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Wow! Strong stuff! Good question! Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Too strong for you, Lori? Appreciate you stopping by. ~* If they give you lined paper, write the other way. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Nope...I can handle it, I'm a big girl ~L |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
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Well, the chief Satyr is the God of fertility is he not? What then should we expect of his minions? Girls 'n' goats... you say it like it's a bad thing. :P Seriously, I like the inspiration here... and the references to Pan and the thyrsus. Add to this their musical talents and it's no wonder our women wander. The versatility you display in your writing amazes me at times. Michael |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Haha! Yeah, I tried to get all the lust-filled demons of mythology, although I barely scratched the surface. Appreciate your very kind words, Michael, very much. ~* If they give you lined paper, write the other way. ~*~ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Keep scratchin', JP... I like where your goat is headed. More, please? |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Haha! Hi Sunshine, is that Billygoat in your neighborhood? Haha! Thanks for dropping in to the lower end of my spectrum. Gotta love it. ~* If they give you lined paper, write the other way. ~*~ |
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