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karren29
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0 posted 2011-10-25 07:36 PM



I know this is something
I feel it in my heart
Just like you
I feel the spark

I sit here waiting
I sit here wondering
I sit here not knowing
How to name this feeling

"I walked into a chair today
coz i was thinking bout you"
i know thats not original
but boy im into you

"you're eyes are the color of
the deep blue sea"
cant wait for the day
u get to look at me

"i cant walk straight
i cant talk straight"
darn i just cant wait
i just want another perfect day

i miss you
im confused
i think i need you
do u feel it too?

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

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Alison
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1 posted 2011-10-26 07:10 PM


At least you have a reason to walk into chairs.  I do that just because they are there.

Seriously, I like this.

A

karren29
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2 posted 2011-10-27 12:29 PM


thanks allison

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

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3 posted 2011-10-31 08:36 AM


enjoyed, i feel it.
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