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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2011-10-25 12:45 PM


Well folks, you've heard Mr. Frosts' fine poem
about two paths and the one he took
When I was young I meandered home
long way around through the woodsy loam
where I conversed with the babbling brooks

Though which of us used to babble most
I'll leave up to you good folks to guess
as I am not ever prone to boast
that I would seem an immodest host
I go for laughs, nothing more or less

But I digress, as a babbling fool,
back to our talk of divergent paths
knee deep I stand in the ol' gene pool
somewhat possessed of the poets' tools
It's true, I swear, 'cause I've done the math

And as for which of those paths I took
you'll not see poems such as Frosts' or Plaths'
I'd rather say "Hah, I made you look"
and not be read just like one more book
but as one who took the "Psycho" path

[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (10-26-2011 08:41 AM).]

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2011-10-25 01:19 PM


I'm crazy about this one! LOL

Lori

JL
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2 posted 2011-10-25 02:08 PM



Happy trails to you...
Just keep an eye out for Nurse Ratched.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Dr.Moose1
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3 posted 2011-10-25 04:27 PM


Lori,
Whoa, whoa, whoa! Hey, there's only so many strait jackets to go around, an' sometimes they make me double up! Thanks, lol.
Doc

JL,
Thanks, would that they were all "happy trails", just doin' my best to put a little more humor into some m'friend.
Doc

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4 posted 2011-10-26 12:39 PM


Though which of us used to babble most
I'll leave up to you good folks to guess
as I am not ever prone to boast

ROFL...

Grinning long before your ba-da-bing
This babbling brook knows how to sing! LOL

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5 posted 2011-10-26 07:09 PM


Very clever, oh babbling one.

A

Dr.Moose1
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6 posted 2011-10-27 07:29 AM


suthern,
Thanks gal, lol, but I still ain't tellin', nope, uh-uh.
Doc

Alison,
Thanks, I've always been impressed with Frosts' use of this particular form, and being that it is probably one of his best known works, I tried not to murder it too bad, lol.
Doc

Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2011-10-27 08:47 PM


Lol, I enjoyed the path you took Doc!  Thanks for the smiles!

Best wishes,
Kit

Dr.Moose1
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8 posted 2011-10-27 08:57 PM


Kit,
Long time well met. Thank you, I still remember you playing with your feet, that remains a classic. Ah, the good ol' days, lol.
Doc

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