Open Poetry #47 |
Happy Rebirthday |
Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Happy Rebirthday The light tumbled over your hair like glittering vines as it caressed your tresses through a breach, in the trees. A glint of light resting on your eyelids for a moment as your mouth lay covered by a cocoon of goose down acting as a bed roll sewn up into a sack. It was your idea for the overnighter under the signs, of our future You said you wanted to show me our horoscope and how my lion has been chasing your virginity long before light was a child and life, was a dream I knelt on one knee as my lips unveiled the frost of your breath stealing the gasp of a night fancy dancing behind the eyes of your loins as wisps of whispers escaped from our mouths and twisted the doorknob of fate nocturnal, shooting stars bursting ablaze in your atmosphere piercing the still into the dawn, of your creation. Lay with me supine within this early morning zenith. The new day is starting her stove o’er the horizon soon we’ll be baking with our sunny sides, up laughing and loving, and burning what we once thought, was lost. The problem was thinking that we’re only, born once. The world will always be, our presence. Sometimes, we were just too afraid, to open it. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
My last camping trip wasn't nearly this fun. *S* I like this very much, Richy! *S* |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
very hot! Lori |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
haha Ruthy.. I've got a feeling, all, of your camping trips involve heat melting sweetness onto soft white pillows stuffed between your scrumptious cookies.. wow.. i already want s'more!! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thank you Lori.. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Boy, I am in the mood to get back to nature. NOW. A |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lion huh? Makes sense. ida |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi richie the world wil always be our presence, great line in an excellent poem yann |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I think I need a "Rebirthday". Can I find one of those at Walmart? LOL... I really enjoy your poetry Richy. Always so rich-eee in spirit. Nice one Mr. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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