Open Poetry #47 |
The Angel Made Me Do It. |
Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Angel Wishes I fell in the air and I drowned in the sky The waves bid adieu as they made the wind cry The truths are all hidden in front of our eyes My heart is now bleached the color of dye I know every secret you’ve hid in your hips You’ve tasted the mysteries that poured from my tips I’ve heard all the grunts of your body I’ve ripped You painted the wounds of my heart that you whipped Body to body and shoeprint to soul I am the eclipse to darken your whole Whimper and whither bending and pole Pink star of night blacker then coal Your morals say no but your oral says more Your scars are all healed but your smile is sore Your devil says quit but your angel says more Your have is a saint but your want is a *bleep* I lay on your tongue and I suck on your dreams I thrust though your eyelids and sit on your screams I pump in your flesh and I burst all your seams I fell in the air, and I drowned, in your streams. yeah i know, a little spicy.. you're welcome |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This "angel" couldn't help it! The Devil made me do it! ~ all of it! Oh, bless me Father for I have sinned... You naughty boy! EA |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
HAHAHAH.. oh Linda.. haha.. that was soo classic... I'm glad you reviewed this piece first.. your comments were so you.. me thinks you have some prayin to do tomorra.. lol ((((luv ya!))) |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Oooh ... my feet are warm now. A |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Pink star of night blacker then coal" a little spicy but oh so nice Richy. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
I'm glad Ali dear, as they always should be.. actually, mine are a little warm too.. lol |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
thank you sweet lady.. I am honored by your gracefull, and stirring self.. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
hot cha cha Richy! nice Lori |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thanks for the dance Lori.. I always did like, the cha cha cha.. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Ohhh I like it spicy, especially loved the rhymes! Keeper fo sure! Kat >^..^< |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Bad boy?? Times 10!! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Well, that was some Angel who made you do it, I say, dear Richy. You are unbound in your expressions and you bring smiles and sighs. Mission fulfilled! Great really ... and now I am going for my first November walk, your words make for warm weather! Margherita |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
whew! very NICE! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Loved it Richy, near each line was a surprise |
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