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Sea of Love |
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Adam Casadevall New Member
since 2010-09-08
Posts 4New Jersey |
Why can't I stand and say Oh baby I'm lost in your way You'll wish for me if I open my door And rejoice as we walk down the shore To our sea of love The gates that hold the seeds of my mind Unlock with your presence, ever so divine And close because it's all just a trap If we meet can I please show you the map To our sea of love Black as night just above your head The girl in front of you has hair so red I'll never work up the courage to say Oh baby I'm lost in your way And I'll drown In my sea of love Will it ever be Our sea of love? |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"And close because it's all just a trap If we meet can I please show you the map To our sea of love" "Will it ever be Our sea of love?" Nice write Adam. I guess you will never know the answer unless you make the first move, and ask. Enjoyed the inner conflict. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
One must have courage to affect change. If you say nothing… nothing is the result. Enjoyed your ponderings. Welcome to Passions. Michael |
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