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no need to rush |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA 
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when i was a child i dreamed of being free spending hours thinking what i could be now, many years behind me my thoughts remain the same and i haven't changed my name but there are some things better left to someone who knows there's no need to rush it rushing only causes pain you told me you'd meet me at second and st. clair and when you didn't show were you sure i'd be there sometimes it's hard to wait sometimes it's better to be late say, who wants to watch the tents go up or the circus clowns comming down honey, it's been said before honey, don't you know it goes both ways some people sleep until morning some people sleep all day some people fight for freedom some say it doesn't pay oh, nobody wins at every game and there's no need to rush it rushing only causes pain There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
This is beautifully written. It is full of much truth. Some people rush through life but I prefer to take it slow.  When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Thank you, my friend. I appreciate your wonderful remarks as always. There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
I have always been a rusher, Faith. I've only slowed down because my age and health reasons demand it. You are right about rushing causes pain. I rushed and caused pain. ~ Life is sexually transmitted ~ |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
JerryPat-Thank you so much for stopping by and commenting on my poem. I always enjoy what you have to say! Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
very insightful and chock full of wisdom...really enjoyed this one...nice work |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind words. Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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