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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-10-17 08:05 PM


Think I'll take a drive
I'm tired of the jive
Peace I want to thrive
It's barely alive
The world does connive
I hope we survive
We'll somehow contrive
To destroy their hive
Think I'll take that drive.


~* The saddest words of tongue or pen are the words It might have been.--John Greenleaf Whittier ~*~

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2011-10-18 06:28 AM


Good morning Jerry,
Good idea, sounds like you could use an airing out.  Let all that mumbo jumbo out of your head so your day doesn't slip bayou.
Stop and smell some roses along the way.

Lori

JerryPat2
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South Louisiana
2 posted 2011-10-18 07:26 AM


Good advice, Lori.

~* The saddest words of tongue or pen are the words It might have been.--John Greenleaf Whittier ~*~

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2011-10-18 09:23 AM


Just don't destroy any hives
m'dear, because the bees
are having enough trouble
surviving as it is.

However, I wouldn't mind someone
removing the buzzing from between
MY ears.


JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
4 posted 2011-10-18 10:11 AM


Ah, it wasn't a bee hive, Sunshine, more like mosque hive.

Thanks for being here.

~* The saddest words of tongue or pen are the words It might have been.--John Greenleaf Whittier ~*~

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2011-10-19 09:35 AM


The world does connive
I hope we survive
We'll somehow contrive
To destroy their hive
Think I'll take that drive.

I'm with you on this one.
Gotta keep your eyes wide open.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
6 posted 2011-10-19 09:40 AM


Their hive, however, is growing. Thank you, JL.

~* The saddest words of tongue or pen are the words It might have been.--John Greenleaf Whittier ~*~

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