Open Poetry #47 |
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Day Begins |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Day Begins As I sit Next to window I watch the sunrise I also watch birds sing As my heart rings While I am thinking of the times Where my heart was in love Listen to the birds softly To my window I feel my heart beat fast As I recall the past Of my memory I sit quietly Whispering the words of love To my heart I feel so close to my home Where I left behind As day begins softly With a birds singing Where my heart ringing |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You are the love, Vandana... and you write beautifully of it. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Nostalgia is a heartfelt emotion, sometimes good, other times . . . ~ Intolerant people are the people who do not believe the way we want them to, |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nice expression of upbeat feelings Vandana Eric ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Yes, you write of "beauty and love" ... beautifully. Alison |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure...James |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Definitely a whisper of home. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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