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easy1
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since 2010-05-22
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0 posted 2011-10-14 12:39 PM



After Snow

Yellow disk through gray
above early fallen snow---
shovels scrape the tune.







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ice
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since 2003-05-17
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1 posted 2011-10-15 07:03 AM


Pretty soon, easy, pretty soon the "yellow disk" will show through the gray.

enjoyed

JL
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since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA
2 posted 2011-10-15 10:53 AM


Visualized it well, right down to the sound of snow shovels.
Excellent write.

JL

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Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2011-10-15 11:00 AM


Great job! Captured perfectly!

Lori

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