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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2011-10-14 11:40 AM


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These days
I just can’t
Get over
How stupid
You were

One among
Many things
A young man buys
A woman who is
Pretty let alone beautiful
Is a rainbow of excuses

I should have known
When asked my astrology sign
I was with a vacuity that was
Irredeemable

And yet still now
Gazing up at stars
I can only offer another
Pitiful rationale

For you see
After all
It was the Age
Of Aquarius


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easy1
Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
1 posted 2011-10-14 12:58 PM


One has to be of a certain age to... and now I will be hearing that Hair-y thing in my head for awhile...

Funny how so many "Aquarians" later turned to looting... Anyway, you've penned another good read.


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