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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-10-13 12:55 PM

As your dark would seek
the softness of my light
Our intertwining
play of smoke gray
My light illuminates you
and defines your darker side
in shadows cast
My sun rises
as your sun sets
And could you
engulf me
you would
as I should
do you as well
in the silver of an
eclipsed silhouette

LGR(C)10/13/11

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-10-13 01:05 PM

Ah, yes, Lori, darkness needs the light, just as light needs some form of darkness to keep the balance. There must be balance between the two for there to be a whole. You are excellent in your choice for poetry today. Light and dark. Dark and light. Of course.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-10-13 01:44 PM

Thank you for always being so quick to respond. Glad you liked this one...it didn't seem quite like my usual fare.
Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2011-10-13 02:03 PM

It certainly wasn't your usual fare, Lori, but I have to tell you I like this side of you.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 2011-10-13 02:15 PM

I read alot into this one... longing from a distance... opposites complimenting one another, all beautifully done. The desire you share in your writing is vivid. A pleasure to read.

Michael

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2011-10-13 02:33 PM

Oh wow, love this.
What a beautiful write!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2011-10-13 02:44 PM

Thanks for not setting the tree on fire when I went out on a limb guys...'preciate the feedback when I do somthin' a little different.

Lori

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2011-10-13 03:41 PM

I love the play of light and dark intermingling. A fantastic word sculpture!

Linda

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2011-10-13 06:25 PM

Very captivating, dear Lori.

M

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