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Open Poetry #47

seams of night and sky

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-10-13 07:35 AM

and now then long legged lovely dawn
with your shimmer wet ready to consume
and your love eyes hungry for more

do you go down on your love of sunset
swallowing his length into your warm
and then taking him inside your glowing

since we have had those suggestions
during the storms of our penned secrets
does your mind take in some darkness too

and bid him kneel beside your eyes
to sip the orange and yellow of your lips
when you are mouthing your harvest

and after, does your wound crave the shadows

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daark

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-10-13 10:33 AM

Dawn is always lovely and when it is "long legged" it becomes even more charming.

"Some darkness" is indispensable for deeper enjoyment of the rewarding glowing radiance.

Your "seams of night and sky" speak masterfully of romantic ponderings.

M

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2011-10-13 12:20 PM

ms mar,,,I do enjoy the mornings and how they climb the sky....wondering often about how they dance with the sunsets..thanks ms

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