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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2011-10-10 07:52 PM


A wonderful notion came to me today
Playing through my thoughts like a ballet
A  time in the past it did playfully speak
About an old porch in Walkers Creek.

My pawpaw and mawmaw lived there
Eking out what the earth would share.
Following a stubborn mule down a row
Putting food on the table, pie ala crow.

A hard life of back-breaking chores
Just after the Second World War.
Plowing corn, pulling cotton to weigh
Hardly a smile except come Sunday.

Ahh, Sunday, that's when the kids came
Bringing grandchildren to great acclaim.
And old wood stove puts out fried chicken
Purple hull peas, cathead biscuits for sopping.

They all gather on the front porch to chat
Built three feet off the ground at that.
It’s a good time, women gossip loose lips
While the men sneak round back for a nip.

Smelly old aunts with their tipsy husbands
Rock and fan and laugh like they planned.
Mason jars are never empty of good sweet tea
Or spring fed water so cold its minus degrees.

As the shadows begin to lengthen at days end
An ice cream maker is fetched a voice says amen.
Smiles grow on the faces of the young and old
We are about to get something nice and cold.

Grandma makes up the vanilla batter
Pours it all in the aluminum canister.
Seals it and puts it in the wooden barrel
Add chunks of ice, salt, cranked by a male.

By the time the ice cream is finally done
Two pairs of shoulders weighs almost a ton.
But the result is so scrumptious and fine
Everybody pigs out like smelly old swine.

Later, stomachs boated, they gather up
Their things to go, don't forget Millie's pup.
Go their separate ways until next Sunday
When back to pawpaw's porch they'll play.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

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Michael
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1 posted 2011-10-10 07:57 PM


Wow... my grandmother had an old handcrank ice cream maker.  What a chore that was, but never met with a complaint either.  Thanks for rekindling a good memory in me.  That's not an easy chore either ya know.  
Michael



Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2011-10-10 07:58 PM


I have memories like that! Well, not the cathead biscuts...but the ice cream and Sunday dinner at the farm. Thanks for the big smile you gave me.  
Lori

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2011-10-10 08:00 PM


Oh yeah, Michael, I couldn't wait until I was old enough to crack that handle. It didn't take me too long to understand what working for the treat meant. Appreciate the comment.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2011-10-10 08:01 PM


You're quite welcomed Lori, and thank you for the read and comments.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

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5 posted 2011-10-10 08:09 PM


You brought back such memories! *S* All of us kids thought we were vital to the ice cream making process because... while the men took turns on the crank... we took turns holding the thing steady! LOL I guess it saved a lot of "is it ready yet?" nagging! LOL Enjoyed this!
JerryPat2
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6 posted 2011-10-10 08:13 PM


Haha! Yeah, it probably did save all the "is it ready yet" pleas, but still, holding that darn thing steady was vital for the operation too. Thank you, suthern, I'm glad I could bring to back to pleasant times.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

ebonygirl
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7 posted 2011-10-10 09:44 PM


Enjoyed your childhood memories, JP2,
Ms. E

JerryPat2
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8 posted 2011-10-10 09:53 PM


Thank you, Ms. E.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

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