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moving on |
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karren29 Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85philippines |
It's been 5 days since you left my heart broken, I thought I couldn’t bear it but I had my head shaken. Yes it still hurts but now I know better That we were never really meant to be together I've built my world around you I thought what we had was true I shared all my dreams with you I even imagined you shared yours too. I will count 5 more days, 5 more weeks, 5 more months, or even 5 more years It will take that long before I can dry all these tears I will have sleepless nights; I will forever have this fright But I will continue to fight till I find the light. People say it takes time to mend a broken heart But I’m willing to have a brand new start. I will believe in falling in love again, And those heartbreaks are never the end. I still love you, Oh God I really do I still wish somehow you feel the same way too I imagine you hugging me so tight I really miss the way it felt so right. But I know it's time to go back to reality By moving on, I’m setting myself free It will take some time but I will get over you Someday, somehow I'll find another love that's true Now all I do is silently cry and pray That God will continue to find a way To help me forget you and live another day And the words "I'm happy" I can finally say. I hope this will be the last time my heart will die For tomorrow I'll live again and I'll try to fly I will forever treasure those sweet moments we had And I will forget the day you made me sad. It's really goodbye now so I'm letting you go But before that I want you to know That no matter what happens I will never fear Falling in love again and shedding another tear " u were never good enough for him or anything like me, |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
and you must not fear the fall, my friend...it's always an awesome thing... enjoyed, j. |
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karren29 Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85philippines |
thank you. im glad you liked it " u were never good enough for him or anything like me, |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
To know love at all is to know it's worth all the pain ten times over. Indeed, never fear it. Michael |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
We breath deeply and start again, appreciate your poem Karen, Ms. E |
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karren29 Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85philippines |
thanks mike, thanks ms. e " u were never good enough for him or anything like me, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Now all I do is silently cry and pray That God will continue to find a way To help me forget you and live another day And the words "I'm happy" I can finally say. You've taken the first steps just by giving love another chance... Enjoyed the write! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"That no matter what happens I will never fear Falling in love again and shedding another tear" With that attitude you will be just fine. Life is what we make of it as we do our best. Enjoyed. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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karren29 Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85philippines |
thank you suthern, thanks JL.. this site is the best really, not only you can share ur work but u can find someone to talk to.. u dont know how much ur helping me right now.. thank you " u were never good enough for him or anything like me, |
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