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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-10-05 08:59 PM




Kisses warm  melting
chocolate dripping like wax
candle light candy

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Krawdad
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1 posted 2011-10-05 10:28 PM


Well, shucks, I was thinking more like chocolate lipstick or something like that.

Smilin' anyway - cuz I'm still thinking about that!


Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2011-10-06 04:12 PM


somethin' like that... keep thinkin'
Michael
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3 posted 2011-10-06 05:53 PM


Yummy, in every sticky sweet imaginable sense of the word... reminded me of something I wrote long ago, if in a more comical sense.  I hope you don't mind me posting it.  
Michael


JL
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4 posted 2011-10-07 11:35 AM


What they said!


JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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5 posted 2011-10-07 05:34 PM


Nice fulfilling poem, Lori.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

Namyh
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6 posted 2011-10-07 07:07 PM


Lori - Just when I thought I had escaped the pull of a Snicker's sweet surrender or the magnetics of a Milky Way madness or even that dreaded Hershey hunger of the 'almonds' kind, this comes along and pulls me right back in testifying that there is no escape from....the Chocolate side of the Force. I give in. Take me!LOL Loved this Lori. Namyh
P.S. - Anybody with an extra Tootsie Roll out there? LOL.  

Sunshine
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7 posted 2011-10-07 11:09 PM


I do think you've ignited a whole
new thought process to sticky sweet...

and where's the harm in that,
I ask you?

Check your email!

Richy
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8 posted 2011-10-10 03:05 PM



oh gosh Lori, what a wonderful imagination you have.. a chocolate candle... you could even eat it couldn't you... ok, now you've got me thinking all kind a ... hmmmm.. different ways that could add to a candle light rendouzvous... ! ...

see... how u start getting my mind going hahah

fantastic piece... sooo swweet..


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