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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-10-05 12:09 PM

Stretching my imagination
in the mirror
Feeding the fantasy
doses of denial
Dismissing
droop and dimples
in light just right
Purposely posing
exposing views
of yesterday’s younger

LGR©10/5/11

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 2011-10-05 01:19 PM

Who says the mirror never lies? We ARE what we feel, I say. Good write, Lori... and I hope you are as beautiful to yourself as you are to the rest of us.

Michael

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-10-05 02:39 PM

I never did get this right so I'll try again. Your poem is a natural progression and inspection we all subject ourselves to from time to time.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (10-07-2011 10:47 PM).]

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

3 posted 2011-10-05 10:57 PM

Nice one!
Kat >^..^<

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2011-10-06 07:58 PM

I'm not sure my imagination is that flexible. LOL But I sure loved reading this! *S*

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2011-10-07 11:27 AM

I've often wondered who the heck that was looking at me from inside the mirror...

Nice, being reflective.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2011-10-07 03:26 PM

I love your mirrored true self, dear Lori.

This is enlightening actually.

M

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

7 posted 2011-10-23 10:15 PM

I like this. Keep on stretching, you are always and forever beautiful.

A

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

8 posted 2011-10-23 10:24 PM

Awe, you're so sweet! Thanks goo gobs!xxoo

Lori

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