Open Poetry #47 |
Stretching |
Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Stretching my imagination in the mirror Feeding the fantasy doses of denial Dismissing droop and dimples in light just right Purposely posing exposing views of yesterday’s younger LGR©10/5/11 |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Who says the mirror never lies? We ARE what we feel, I say. Good write, Lori... and I hope you are as beautiful to yourself as you are to the rest of us. Michael |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I never did get this right so I'll try again. Your poem is a natural progression and inspection we all subject ourselves to from time to time. ~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (10-07-2011 10:47 PM).] |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Nice one! Kat >^..^< |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm not sure my imagination is that flexible. LOL But I sure loved reading this! *S* |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I've often wondered who the heck that was looking at me from inside the mirror... Nice, being reflective. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love your mirrored true self, dear Lori. This is enlightening actually. M |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I like this. Keep on stretching, you are always and forever beautiful. A |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Awe, you're so sweet! Thanks goo gobs!xxoo Lori |
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