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JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

0 posted 2011-10-04 07:40 PM

Waiting on winter to Warm My Soul

Improve on nothing in your living.
Be as you were, and probably now are…

However, I ask
forget me never…
Moreover, know that in my heart
my love for you will be forever…

Understand that my heart is yours,
you did, without much effort,
conquered all.

I have nowhere to hide my infatuation for you –
It appears in my dreams
and in nameless love songs
and poems I pen for you,
and in whispers,
alive in those snowflakes
like the ones,
just outside your door…

Put your hand out and catch one,
and trust, that snow flake is as my heart,
melting,
just touching you…

I cling to memories in my heart,
warming memories of cold wintry snow.

Memories of winter with you
some loving, some silly with passion,
but always to hug
and hold
in that winter time’s cold…

A cup of warm chocolate,
or one hot coffee for two.
Never a dull moment with you,
never…

So until that wintry time,
that I may perhaps see you again,
I will be waiting on a wintry day
to be with you.

Just,
waiting on a winter to warm my soul…

***

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2011-10-04 11:17 PM

Your title is so pretty and your choice of words are golden embers that warm the heart.

Lovely poem, JL~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-10-05 10:16 AM

Yeah, what she said!

Lori

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 2011-10-05 01:24 PM

quote:
However, I ask
forget me never…

The fear of being forgotten can be such anguish. You pen your memories beautifully... how can they not be shared likewise from the other side?

Michael

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2011-10-06 07:50 PM

I have nowhere to hide my infatuation for you –
It appears in my dreams
and in nameless love songs
and poems I pen for you,
and in whispers,
alive in those snowflakes
like the ones,
just outside your door…

Put your hand out and catch one,
and trust, that snow flake is as my heart,
melting,
just touching you…

So very tender and romantic... and so very beautiful!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2011-10-06 07:54 PM

A pleasure to read...James

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2011-10-07 04:25 AM

Lovely, romantic poem, JL.
Ida

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2011-10-07 11:09 AM

Blues, thank you so much. Your reply is sweet poetry.
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Lori, Heeheeee, thank you!
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Michael, Thank you.
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Suthern, You pulled out the heart of this, thank you for understanding.
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James, Thank you sir.
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Ida, Thank you so much for reading and replying.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2011-10-07 01:50 PM

Put your hand out and catch one,
and trust, that snow flake is as my heart,
melting,
just touching you…

Talk to me of snowflakes and I am instantly transported into fairyland.

This is beautiful and heartmelting, dear JL.

M

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

9 posted 2011-10-10 03:15 PM

good grief.. you just melted my igloo and it isnt even snowing yet... ! ...

what a charming romantic you are... im jealous!

In a good way of course

Great piece!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

10 posted 2011-10-10 08:25 PM

Very, very well conveyed, my friend...with warmth and soul...

well done.

j.

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

11 posted 2011-10-10 09:36 PM

Who is JL? What a beautiful love poem!
Someone is very lucky to be loved by you,
Ms. E

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

12 posted 2011-10-11 01:15 PM

Ms. Margherita: Thank you so much for your reply.
**
Richy: LOL. Thanks for the reply it is truly appreciated.
**
J: Thank you sir. Appreciate the “well done”
**
Ms. E, You are very sweet and most generous with your words, thank you.

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

priyanka
Member

since 2009-06-15

Posts 216
india

13 posted 2011-10-11 01:48 PM

What a lovely poem! My heart immediately seems to move to this beautiful place, in my mind I'm aleady there

Loved it

priyanka
Member

since 2009-06-15

Posts 216
india

14 posted 2011-10-11 01:50 PM

What a lovely poem! My heart immediately seems to move to this beautiful place, in my mind I'm already there

Loved it

priyanka
Member

since 2009-06-15

Posts 216
india

15 posted 2011-10-11 01:51 PM

What a lovely poem! My heart immediately seems to move to this beautiful place, in my mind I'm already there

Loved it

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

16 posted 2011-10-11 01:51 PM

Thank you priyanka for your very kind words.
(times-three)
JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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