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karren29
Member

since 2011-09-29

Posts 85
philippines

0 posted 2011-10-03 04:42 PM

this is the first poem i wrote, i wrote this when i was 13..

I've been loving you for so long
I've been dreaming of you all night long
I keep telling myself some other time
Maybe you will be mine

I keep asking myself why
Just because of this damn love I cry
And now I have to let you fly
Even if it means I'm going to die

I love you that's true
I want to be with you yes I do
I want to feel being loved by you
But that's just a dream that wont come true

Now my love it's time to say goodbye
I promise you will never see me cry
But before I let you go
I just want to say I love you so..

"i wanna know how it feels to be over you for real, til i do, ill be writing POEMS about you"

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-10-03 04:47 PM

How old are you no, fourteen? Just kidding, JUST kidding. Not bad writing for a thirteen-year-old. Is he the one you say at the bottom that you say "i wanna know how it feels to be over you for real, til i do, ill be writing POEMS about you"?

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

karren29
Member

since 2011-09-29

Posts 85
philippines

2 posted 2011-10-03 10:27 PM

hehe.. uhm nah..its not for him..m

"i wanna know how it feels to be over you for real, til i do, ill be writing POEMS about you"

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2011-10-04 07:05 PM

You did a nice job, dear Karren, when you started to write poetry.

M

karren29
Member

since 2011-09-29

Posts 85
philippines

4 posted 2011-10-04 07:09 PM

thank you margherita...

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2011-10-04 08:20 PM

Wow, first write?

Very nice.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

karren29
Member

since 2011-09-29

Posts 85
philippines

6 posted 2011-10-04 09:18 PM

thanks JL..

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

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