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Amberzlynnc
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since 2010-08-24
Posts 229
New Jersey

0 posted 2011-10-02 11:13 PM


Cool winds have bitten.
Two nights into October,
and I feel the sting.

*Amber

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-10-02 11:16 PM


Oh yeah, even down here in the swamp I'm having to wear real pants (not shorts) and a jacket when I walk my mutt for the first time in the morning. Gotta love it.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

flash
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since 2010-11-28
Posts 213
miami beach, florida
2 posted 2011-10-03 07:47 AM


Enjoyed the haiku chill..I live in sunny south Florida and we hardly ever experience a cold spell (when it reaches 60 we run for the blankets)

Al

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2011-10-07 04:33 AM


Nice Haiku, Amberzlynnc. Enjoyed.
                              Ida

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
4 posted 2011-10-07 04:54 AM


I can feel the sting too, wonderful write,


yann

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