swallows of dawn & brim whiskey

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Open Poetry #47

swallows of dawn & brim whiskey

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-10-02 07:59 AM

mouthfuls of momentary
where rimming the brim of dawn
with my eyes looking hungry

she says I am a satyr in heated dream
which I would not deny
lest she nurse the ends of my lies

then swallows them pretending
I am another lover she spent to soft
then devoured his memory lingering

to lubricate just a kiss of morning
she would use on my smile
so I might taste what she craves

and drink the whiskey she has spilled

____________

daark

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

1 posted 2011-10-02 10:07 AM

"mouthfuls of momentary" love it...only YOU could come up with these phrasings~~

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

2 posted 2011-10-02 03:00 PM

What "lies" Mr. D? LOL
Enjoyed your poem,
ms. e

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2011-10-02 03:07 PM

Ms MMs, thank you lady friend.

_____

Ms E

Thank you for the words you offer.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2011-10-02 06:46 PM

You write so fine DS, with just a hint of satire and honesty, and always the dark seduction that becomes you.

Oh goodie!!!

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2011-10-03 06:43 AM

babyblue...you smile me...spank you very much babe

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