Open Poetry #47 |
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karren29 Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85philippines |
You held my hand so tight We watched the stars all night But still I realize There's something in your eyes. The way you say you love me And that we are meant to be Is killing every piece of me If you could only see. There's no doubt you really care But it's your heart you can never share And though you tried your best to love me It's just not meant to be and so I set you free. It's hard for me to let go But it's the only way I know To spare you from suffering And to save my heart from dying. It's true you want my happiness But it's time to be honest And as much as it hurts I'm going to say it now It's time for us to break our vows. Still I thank you for everything And it's your love I'll forever be missing And now that I have to go Remember what we had was never a show. I love you dear and so I fear You'll be miserable if I am near So take this chance and explore the world Let your heart be your sword! Goodbye my love and be happy I'll be fine you have nothing to worry Take her hand and you will see, That I was never your destiny!! "i wanna know how it feels to be over you for real, til i do, ill be writing POEMS about you" |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
A very hard decision to make, indeed. You pen it well. |
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karren29 Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85philippines |
again, thanks nicole "i wanna know how it feels to be over you for real, til i do, ill be writing POEMS about you" |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Whoa! Can't think of anything else to say. ~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
So difficult to do, done bravely, enjoyed, ms. e |
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karren29 Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85philippines |
THANKS jerry, thanks ms e.. glad u liked it "i wanna know how it feels to be over you for real, til i do, ill be writing POEMS about you" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sometimes we let someone go because we don't love them... sometimes we let them go because we so love them. I enjoyed this! |
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