Open Poetry #47 |
un-emancipated |
steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
un-emancipated my eyes behold the beauty of a soft smile serenely set as Wisdom rehearses “like apples of gold in pictures of silver” fitly spoken like the eye-dances that encase the mind un-free to proclaim liberty to decipher the depths that meanings bring when beholding simplicity while unmasking reality un-emancipated... ...yet free |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
This is beautiful Steaven, very much enjoyed Lori |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
You spoke to the beauty with a language that never dies . . . Love . . . ~ Life is sexually transmitted ~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You're on a roll, Steaven. Turning out some fine writing. Ida |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Lori, thank you…so very glad you enjoyed…I am honored by your comment JerryP, a very kind and generous review…thank you so much Ida, wow…you caught me off guard…thank you, thank you (and did I say thank you?) |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Freely written within the confines of beauty and excellence, as always. Owl |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love this~~ it speaks to me M |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Owl, my soul, you truly make me feel more important than I ought...thank you for the kind remarks miss M, am glad you found this enjoyable and that it spoke to you...thank you for reading and commenting |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
very powerful delivery on this one...great poem There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Steaven if you think that I make you feel more important than you ought to feel, may I suggest that you read the poetry of Steavenr - that will change your mind! Smiles. Owl |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Undoubtedly exquisite. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Lovely. You always paint such beauty with your words. Enjoyed. -Trina |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It's great to see your muse is alive and well. Loving your poetry, steavenr~ |
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