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JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

0 posted 2011-09-25 07:00 AM

Twilight’s Lamp

Harvesting touch,
from mind to hand.
Fostering fingertips
to relay their tap and pressing.
Soothing harmony, two beings
un-divided.
Pleasure,
a moment of senses,
shared within human map.
Iridescent glistening,
tingling on shivering lips
Spirit revived in report
as mind and body attain
its warm assurance,
made with love…

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

[This message has been edited by JL (09-25-2011 08:24 AM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-09-25 08:43 AM

Wow, dear JL, I love this "harvesting touch" in which you convey the wonderful feeling of being one.

Truly delightful.

M

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

2 posted 2011-09-25 09:07 AM

"a moment of senses,
shared within human map."

Awww I liked that!

I want one in Braiile.

Wonderfully done!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2011-09-25 09:08 AM

Good use of words in this almost classic-sounding poem of pleasure, exploration, and finally, and lastly . . . Love. Nice work.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2011-09-25 03:09 PM

I read the title and hoped to find lines worthy of such a beautiful naming... and I wasn't disapppointed. *S*

Soothing harmony, two beings
un-divided.

Absolutely lovely!!

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

5 posted 2011-09-25 03:46 PM

"Made with love", yes made with love, nice JL,
ms. e

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2011-09-25 06:16 PM

Margherita:  Thanks lady.
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Richy: Thank you sir.  Braille?  What a great idea.
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Jerry:  Thanks; I appreciate the ‘almost classic’ sound to my poem.
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Suthern:  You are a peach!  Always such kind words.
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Ms. E.  Bless you for your sweet reply.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

shelerellaSP
Junior Member

since 2011-08-12

Posts 42

7 posted 2011-09-27 01:55 AM

Love the lamp made with love!

Beautiful.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

8 posted 2011-09-27 10:03 AM

Very nice, much enjoyed!
Lori

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