Open Poetry #47 |
Precarious Positions |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Precarious Positions Should you find yourself in a relationship of which I shall now describe, should you find yourself with a woman that won't commit but has the most beautiful eyes, should she kiss you like you've never been kissed before, should she give you every reason to adore her and then many more, should she cause your heart to melt like its hot chocolate in the sun, should she be the woman of your dreams but then take up and run, what would you do if such a precarious situation was the wants & the needs & the desires of your life, what if you wanted nothing more then to have her as your loving wife, what would be your thoughts, your actions, what would you have to say, if one foot wanted to go and one foot needed to stay. JamesLee 23September 2011 precarious-dependent upon the will or favor of another person. [This message has been edited by JamesMichael (09-24-2011 10:38 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear James, you caught this state of deep involvement and dependance perfectly well. When that someone prefers freedom to commitment and you are not inclined to fly high only sporadically, you better try to detach, because it could become a painful twirling that would never ever bring you satisfaction. In clinging to someone who doesn't want to commit there is never ever any gain, but mostly pain. Just my thoughts, as you asked here. This said, we must also consider that we can't "possess" another ... Margherita |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice, James. Life is full of precarious events. Remember that old, old, saying: "Wherever one foot goes the other will soon follow." ~Author Unknown... Enjoyed your write. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Margherita and JL for your responses...James |
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