Looking out the Window(age 11)

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Open Poetry #47

Looking out the Window(age 11)

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

0 posted 2011-09-22 07:04 PM

I laid on the
living room floor,
staring out the
window. It was an
ending for August, but
september will take
it's place. I could almost
feel fall, but the sun
shook the sensation from
my body. The sun weaved
it's rays through the
leaves and danced
on to the floor,
moving softly across
my arm. The air was
filled with water
sprinklers and fresh cut
grass. Yet always smell
like a juicy, ripe
watermelon, that I could
almost taste it. The day
was silent with wind and
leaves brushing against
each other. As birds
dash across the sky, I
stare at the tree near
the window. Where helicopter
seeds fly down hitting
me in the head hard,
fast and with percising.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2011-09-23 05:15 AM

Sounds like a lazy summer afternoon.
It's pretty nice to look back at some of the joys of being a kid.

Enjoyed your write.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2011-09-23 02:43 PM

You had marvelous powers of observation and the ability to put them to paper at a young age! *S*

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