Open Poetry #47 |
As Dawn Breaks |
OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
AS DAWN BREAKS 22 September 2011 Wafting in moons ago imaginings to the whispers of the dawn as it tiptoes over the shy horizon gifting dancing flowers with natural gold while the sleeping night in dreams dares to ask forgiveness for its wanderings. Owl |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"to the whispers of the dawn as it tiptoes over the shy horizon" Enjoyed this write, but this line is superb. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
JL copied the same lines I would have... This is lovely!! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
The wanderings, forgiven or not, are vital to some of us. Mayhap forgiveness is not necessary, but merely acceptance. There's many moons ahead too. Michael |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Lovely, dear Owl. I agree with Michael's comment too. M |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful! I do the MS Walk everyday!! |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
It was very vivid and beautiful indeed. Much enjoyed |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Dawn quite often takes me by surprise--but even more so when its praises are sung by an Owl. You seem so connected to the planet that I marvel that you can walk at all. You're kind of a natural wonder all on your own, yanno. Love you lady. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thanks, JL. Thanks, Ruth. Thank you, Michael. There was forgiveness – more no need for forgiveness. Smiles. Thank you, Margherita. Thank you, Misty Lilacs. Thank you, Ken. Thank you, Karen. I loved your praise, your knowing me so well, the so very special content of what you said as anyone who knows me can imagine, the smiles, the hugs and, of course, your love, but most of all, your kindness. It is kindness that grows me best. Owl |
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