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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. What if God Woke up And that was that No elaborate theories Or cause and effect Then finding the fact At a loss what next Just thought to himself I’m lonely . |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I understand that this is not exactly what you are talking about, but just want to say that God never sleeps, and He is a best friend to anyone who wants Him, and He doesn't have moods and is always available, so you never need to be lonely. This is a beautiful and sensitive pondering. Thank you for sharing it with us. Owl |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, I see what you mean, I think. You mean what if He woke up after the first day of the Creation and we had never been created. The happy truth is that He didn't, but pondering what ifs makes us so very sensitively aware of the blessings that we have, as you have so beautifully implied here. Owl [This message has been edited by OwlSA (09-21-2011 03:02 AM).] |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FyxUwaq00Rc Thanks for reading John . |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Myth vs. myth? Such is Berlinski's notion. |
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