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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2011-09-20 10:25 PM


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What if God
Woke up
And that was that

No elaborate theories
Or cause and effect

Then finding the fact
At a loss what next

Just thought to himself
I’m lonely


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OwlSA
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1 posted 2011-09-21 02:27 AM


I understand that this is not exactly what you are talking about, but just want to say that God never sleeps, and He is a best friend to anyone who wants Him, and He doesn't have moods and is always available, so you never need to be lonely.

This is a beautiful and sensitive pondering.  Thank you for sharing it with us.

Owl

OwlSA
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2 posted 2011-09-21 02:30 AM


Oh, I see what you mean, I think.  You mean what if He woke up after the first day of the Creation and we had never been created.

The happy truth is that He didn't, but pondering what ifs makes us so very sensitively aware of the blessings that we have, as you have so beautifully implied here.

Owl

[This message has been edited by OwlSA (09-21-2011 03:02 AM).]

Huan Yi
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3 posted 2011-09-21 02:35 PM


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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FyxUwaq00Rc


Thanks for reading


John


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Krawdad
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4 posted 2011-09-21 09:04 PM


Myth vs. myth?  Such is Berlinski's notion.
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