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OwlSA
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0 posted 2011-09-19 05:58 AM



LOVE’S GRATITUDE
19 September 2011

Sometimes, mutual gifts
both of them given in quiver-love and soulful understanding
and both received in solemn gratitude of purpose,
can bring
a lifetime’s pain,
a thick forever blade,
twisting,
twisting,
twisting
in two noble hearts
and agonised in love
in the silent hours.

Owl

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2011-09-19 07:33 AM


Dear sensitive Owl, despite the gratitude for the gift of love there can be that subtle, yet agonizing pain for what has changed. Detachment isn't an easy attitude to reach, though it would reduce the intensity of "twisting" of the "knife".

This is extremely poignant.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

OwlSA
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2 posted 2011-09-19 02:47 PM


Thank you, Margherita
JL
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3 posted 2011-09-19 07:11 PM


In the silent hours even a grief-stricken heart can find gratitude for living in love.
I guess once we learn what the application of love is, being grateful never forgetting its first consequence; we apply or overlay that emotion in our life’s situation even as those situations change over the years.  Reviewing them in our silent hours.

I am probably way off in understanding what is intended in your write, even so I think it is a beautiful display of a very deep emotion.

JL
Beeg smile!

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

OwlSA
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4 posted 2011-09-20 01:13 AM


Thank you, JL, for your beautiful reply.

Owl

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