Open Poetry #47 |
Once And Forever |
Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Once And Forever Like the early word that gets the squirm the morning, of lost interludes between fate and hollow lays still in its fast waiting to break through the membrane of its maidenhood lingering, for a whispered silence, a feather of air against the collar of her quivering, along the outer peel of her erect nuzzling beget by geese underneath the moist bumps that tremble and strain to break through and fly away from her parched and breathless skin that keeps the embodiment of her virtuality intact and soft, within. And so the rhythm of conception, she continues. A memoir of matter and blood of energy, this, procreation of need and instinct seen through flowing sheers of intricacy framed by the soft shards of windowed pain, and pleasure. It was always to be, of such circles. Aureoles of sigh on chests heaving toward the sky, bands of gold purring melodies around fingers, ovals of puckered lips mouthing delicacies of affection; orbs, of eyes that glisten and twitch in dream, never, passing without a pause to glance, and remember; the shape of a tear as it falls onto the pillow cooling the blush beneath a lone, star filled night. A circle, a circle is also a zero. Which is how I feel sometimes, without you. A story where the beginning, and the end are the same. Like you, a perfection of symmetry and balance, of harmony and artistry. A fantasy unabridged over a sea of no promises, a fairytale of infinite, in a wind up music box that chose, to keep dancing. Life is sometimes not getting what you want, but receiving what you deserve, I guess. You never have to say goodbye to someone if that person gives you a part of them to take with you and keep, as part of how you see and feel things around you, forever. It’s taken me a long time to understand, how hard it is lose something you never even, had. It’s kind of hard to forget someone though when sky and the ocean remind you of them, and like the sea, I keep holding and holding on, but the water within my hands, she is gone she is, gone. Nothing left in my grip but the salt of tears that slipped and memories of you lingering in my veins. How do you disremember someone when they once wrote inside your heart, where the breeze of their words, once and forever blew. I’ve spent so much time trying to figure out the universe, with all its beauty and wonderment. It’s a pretty big poem though but I’m working my way through it, one star at a time though hope filled eyes of notion and wish. The universe is a blindingly dark and beautifully unfair place, filled with an elegance of mystery and an edge of circumstance. The cosmos in and of itself never really will make true sense. That’s why it invented, us. Me and you. We are the chosen, in this blink of kingdom come that will be done to speak for the eternities to make reason and meaning of its whole purpose, to justify and validate its discrimination and its justness, its oppression and its tolerance, its utter agony and its full compassion, its venomous bite of hate and its, unconditional kiss of forgiveness through the shouts of your soft scream piercing the vastness, near and beyond, of me of me, forever, within you. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, I am breathless, dear Richy! Such an incredibly creative emotion filled river of images and interior research. It's so good to read you again! One read of this outstanding work is not enough of course ... it has to be savored slowly. Love, Margherita |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thank you dear friend, I just had a desire to write something today. So nice to hear from you again, you're the best |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You never have to say goodbye to someone if that person gives you a part of them to take with you and keep, as part of how you see and feel things around you, And yet... there is left the ache of wanting all and holding only a part. This makes me remember forevers that expired all too quickly... gone but never forgotten... incorporated into who I am. *S* Beautiful write!! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear Suthern, that was such a beautiful reply, thanks so much for sharing your lovely thoughts, I really appreciate it... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful read, my friend...good to read you again. j. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thank you friend, I appreciate your comments! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
loveeeeeeeeeee your poetry |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Awwwwww youuuuu... Thank you Helen that was very sweet! |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Ohhh Richy! Such an out pour of emotions which deeply effected me! Glad to see you back, you have been missed. Kat >^..^< |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
And I've missed you as well my dear friend Kat, thanks so much for taking the time to read one of my loooonnngg rants haha... Take good care of you! |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
the universal perfect shape of a tear . . . |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Aw, Richy, it all comes down to a blink and a tear the warmth we give, the love without fear the petal's touch tender, and blossoms grown dear You touch the mists this morning blowing on the winds of time... ~K |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
You never have to say goodbye to someone if that person gives you a part of them to take with you and keep, as part of how you see and feel things around you, I, along with Suthern choose this,as it is so true. Any bit of love or affection given freely is never lost, no matter how short or long the pairing was. Good to see you writing as only you can do, jo |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I have to agree with suthern and latearrival. Very heartfelt read. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thanks for the comment Krawdad, I liked it. Klassy Lassy, that was reallyyyy soo beautiful.. thank you soo much you really made my day! Its kinda funny Jo, I was going to leave that little part out at first, but didn't.. its always interesting what others get out of each piece... I'm glad you liked it, and thanks a ton for the kind remarks! Thanks JL your time and kindness is very appreciated! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Richy~ You and your poetry make it hard to breathe, my chest gets all tight and my eyes water.... your poetry is just so lovely, so emotional, so utterly passionate. I adore reading you and wish you where here more often, heck I wish for a lot of things, I'm just very happy to see you here today. Thanks for sharing your big beautiful heart. Warm hugs, always~ |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Awww Lori that was about the sweetest thing anyone's ever said to me... thank you so much for that, it means a ton coming from someone who's poetry I adore as well. I'll try and stick around for a bit, until I start boring you guys to death as usual. But you know I'll always be back. How could I not. Keep wishing for those, lots of things, I do too. Sometimes thats the only thing that keeps me going... Big hugs to you too dear freind |
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