Open Poetry #47 |
Kyoto Autumn |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. A woman Remembering Playing solo On the koto A wooden house With open windows The sun shining On amber eaves Maple leaves Over colored fish Under water Ancient rocks The not so distant past Set in a crimson sea . |
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flash Member
since 2010-11-28
Posts 213miami beach, florida |
Each stanza concise and quite evocative. Enjoyed the read, flash |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Wow! In my humble opinion, you have surpassed yourself with this, John. I have lost count of the number of times that I have read this - I have no idea whether I breathed through any of the readings because I was too lost in the moment of all of it, but perhaps mostly in awe of the crimson sea. After I have pressed Submit Reply, I know I will read it a few more times. Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Enchanting atmosphere. M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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