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Open Poetry #47

5 more senryu

flash
Member

since 2010-11-28

Posts 213
miami beach, florida

0 posted 2011-09-13 05:26 AM

High School reunion
sending {hugs}
from our webcams

car dashboard --
a plastic Jesus blessing
plastic flowers

moving sale
everything must go
furniture, wife,...kids

after the concert
the child prodigy returns
to his playpen

--flash

[This message has been edited by flash (09-13-2011 06:44 AM).]

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2011-09-13 06:05 AM

Man, don't stop, you are on a roll!

Enjoyed the read.

JL

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2011-09-13 06:09 AM

Too cute, you rock, dear flash.

You are a fantastic observer!

Love,
Margherita

flash
Member

since 2010-11-28

Posts 213
miami beach, florida

3 posted 2011-09-13 06:47 AM

JL, Margherita: Thanks for your generous comments. Much appreciated. I prefer senryu (the human side of haiku) for its humour--altho I do write haiku--which I will post sometime soon

--flash

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