Open Poetry #47 |
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Loved Through Time |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA ![]() |
This is written through my Dad's point of view. ![]() I wrote this August 9, 2009. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ We have been together for almost 39 years come this December You were by my side through good times and the rough You were by my side when I lost my job When I was depressed because I felt useless without it I stuck by your side through the knee foot and women surgeries to help you heal quicker with my love You were by my side when my mother passed away that cold day back in February of 2003 You got me through the loss and the pain of that loss We had 3 wonderful kids together that help us through life as year by year it gets harder for us to live Especially with all our health problems You will be loved through time You are my best friend Without you I would be a lonely man I love you for eternity my beautiful wife When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is always wonderful when we believe we can see life and lives through others' eyes. Thank you, Julie |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
That's nice, there's a lot to be said for better or for worse. Thank you for sharing your poem, it warmed my heart. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I really do like it very much and I think more of the world today need to get back to this kind of loyalty and love. Too much self centered freedom today is too harmful. Eric two maggots were fighting in dead earnest! |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
Sunshine, I thank you for your comment. I know this is what my Dad thinks about all the time. I think it is what has kept my parents together for 40 years. ![]() BluesSerenade, Thank you for your comment. I am so glad it has touched your heart. Eric, I am glad you enjoyed my poem. I agree that in this world today there are not many marriages that have lasted as long as my parents. Which is quite sad. When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
This is very beautifully written. I really enjoyed it. ![]() There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
Faith, I am glad you enjoyed it. ![]() When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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