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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2011-09-09 11:18 PM

Scribbled on the Sand

One feather sweep annunciates your name
As if caressed by the very thought
In script against a wetted laugh
I leave love in your honor

Might I, a trailing cloud of smoke
Emulate the sweetness of time
Holy in its warmth and awareness
I leave love

Assured that every word is drunken
Tasted by the lake, inhaled for my sake
Against your back and softly stirring
Scribbled on the sand
I leave love

Copyright Kkh 9*9*11

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

1 posted 2011-09-10 12:48 PM

ephemeral as
the wash of the wave
temporary as
the shift of the sand
we write as if
in disappearing ink

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2011-09-10 04:08 AM

And I perceive this love through the beauty and intensity of your words, dear TD!

Moments of tender communication.

Love,
Margherita

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2011-09-10 04:20 AM

Sensitively intoxicating, and a true blue diamond is this!

Owl

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2011-09-10 05:47 AM

"Might I, a trailing cloud of smoke
Emulate the sweetness of time
Holy in its warmth and awareness
I leave love"

You always amaze and wow the reader.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

5 posted 2011-09-10 09:48 AM

Thought writ in sand are engraved on each grain.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2011-09-10 09:53 AM

Thank you so much for your kind comments.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

7 posted 2011-09-10 03:35 PM

I am hugely fond of the image of

Love ... scribbled in sand
against a backdrop of the
sweetness of time.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2011-09-12 02:36 PM

This is so beautiful... I especially love the repetition of I leave love. *S*

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2011-09-15 07:07 PM

Nice...James

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

10 posted 2011-09-17 06:45 PM

Very powerful....reminded me of a period of time I spent in southern california near the beach .... leaving love behind in the scribbles in the sand....glad I finally found the words written to describe it .... good work!!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

11 posted 2011-09-17 07:30 PM

loved this, my friend...

j.

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

12 posted 2011-09-17 07:45 PM

Just beautiful! Enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

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