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Loser Rider
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Loser Rider |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Loser Rider I'm a loser rider a cool loose spider crawling up to you see me coming through break the glass heart in case of emergency tear it apart and put it back together for me will you promise it to me? I'm an idiot wind blowing doors open relentless and raining too damn busy renaming the stars that circle like feathers of angels trace a spiral in dark skies of jetliner trails will you follow them for me? Loser rider on the highway tonight tuned to the radio signal, out of sight after all this time I still want to unwind myself inside your mind Cool swindler man slip on hot sand calling out to you see me busting through sprung a leak, but I'm listing towards you take a peak on all that I've thought of you tell me, will you think of me? Loser rider tripping through wires pull the plug and douse this wildfire after all this mess I still want to impress myself to your loveliness And I rev up the engine of desire and I paint-by-number color your grace and I hit the ground numbed by wonder sparked by this fire looking for your lovely face looking for your lovely face Loser rider on the highway at night tuned guitar to satellites and stoplights after all this pain I still want to rain myself on your windowpane Loser rider, ruler of misspent youth red and rusted, you know it's the truth after all this is writ I still want to hit myself for my love to fit neatly inside you Looking for your lovely face dusted off your painted grace looking for your lovely face Loser rider wanna win the race you set the pace "Don't mistake paradise for a pair of long legs." -Watts, Some Kind of Wonderful |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
I do love a good love poem. Plus this has a hint of action to it.  When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
This was a COOL poem! Enjoyed! Kat >^..^< [This message has been edited by katahdin (01-21-2011 12:13 AM).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very musical, lot of cool verses in this. Eric two maggots were fighting in dead earnest! |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Yeah. Musical. This is like a song. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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