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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-09-07 11:02 AM



Autumn’s arrival is foretold
In the cool of shortening days
and fall flower’s buds and blooms
Summer’s ovens on hiatus return to baking
Hot mugged tea replaces tall iced glasses
Evening sweaters come out
to watch the harvest moon rise
Sitting closer
holding warming hands
TVs talk football
stores fancy Halloween
Autumn’s arrival is foretold

LGR©9/7/11




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Margherita
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1 posted 2011-09-07 11:29 AM


Very beautiful, dear Lori! There are indeed those small changes even if we are not in it yet ...

Love your imagery and feelings.

Love,
Margherita

JL
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2 posted 2011-09-07 04:14 PM


"TVs talk football"

Enjoyed the write!
And adios to the odious days of summer!


JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2011-09-07 04:46 PM


Nice words to herald the coming of fall, Lori. I think most people are quite ready for the changing of the season this time around.

~~ How come abbreviated is such a long word? ~~

ice
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4 posted 2011-09-07 05:31 PM


I love autumn, and this poem.

Come read to me some poem,
Some simple and heartfelt lay,
That shall soothe this restless feeling
And banish the thoughts of day.
Longfellow

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5 posted 2011-09-07 09:42 PM


TVs talk football... and that's a language I love! LOL

And while we're a long way from sweaters, we're finally out of triple digit temps... thank you, Lord!!

Marchmadness
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6 posted 2011-09-08 10:35 PM


Well, it is still over 100% here so I'm looking forward to all of the things you mention in "Autumn's Arrival", Lori.
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