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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA 
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one moment in time the world stopped turning the earth shook my knees felt weak heart thumped and breathless life was dream-like my body trembled at your touch in that one moment time evaporated our eyes solidly engaged i knew without a single doubt i had fallen for you with a love second to none There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Excellent...there is nothing else like it, is there? |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Thank you, Lori! You are so right..nothing at all. There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Awe! This poem brightened my mood. Well done.  |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
Isn't it a wonderful feeling? Marcia www.thewritingforum.net |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The world stopped turning... and life began. *S* This is so very beautiful!! |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
"with a love second to none" Amazing how our hearts react to love, Enjoyed your poem Faithmariee, well done Ms. E |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"with a love second to none" Excellent write! Loved the last line. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Thank you, Falling Rain. I appreciate your lovely comments so much! Love-Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Dear Marcia-Thanks so much for stopping by and responding to my poem. I appreciate it. Love- faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Dear Suthern-Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. Love-Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Dear ebonygirl-Thank you so much for your comments. I'm happy you enjoyed my poem. Dear JL-Thank you for your wonderful remarks. You made me smile! Love-faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You got that moment under your skin and remember it for us so perfectly! Dear Faith, this is very very nice. Love, M |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Dear Margherita-Thank you so much for your lovely comments. You made my heart smile. Love-Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
oops I didn't undeersood the last stanza : i had fallen for you with a love second to none could someone help me with french translation, i am doubtless and it can change the very meaning of the poem, thanks if you have some time and french knowledge yann |
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