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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-08-29 10:51 AM



Green eyes
gaze upon your leather
Drawn by a lustful tether
wishing to be there
in your wherever
Oh that I could be
what you lay
hands upon
throughout your day
Or the edge of a drink
your lips touch on.
To be like sweat
and feel your everywhere
wherever you are at


LGRĀ©8/29/11

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-08-29 11:03 AM


This is a topper. By that I mean it tops almost everything written by you so far. You and Daark must be third cousins removed, because your way with the English language is special and, in your case, very sensuous.

~ I like long walks, especially when they are taken by people who annoy me. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2011-08-29 11:15 AM


Jerry I am humbled by your comparison of my work to Daark. Thank you
Lori

Margherita
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3 posted 2011-08-29 01:34 PM


You expressed what I call total compenetration, it happens when love is in the firework stage!

Great job, passionate girl!

Love,
Margherita

Sunshine
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4 posted 2011-08-29 09:02 PM


Hmmmm, did these green eyes ever tell
you the story about the boy in the leather
jacket that I watched when I was
15....

oh wait, nevermind...

ahem.

Sunshine has adjusted her skirts.  

Enjoyed, darlin girl!


Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2011-08-30 06:27 PM


Margherita, thank you so much for your generous compliments
____________________________________________
Sunshine! You're blushing!

Lori

bel1e
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6 posted 2011-08-31 09:09 AM


~~wow~~ breathtaking~

             

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2011-08-31 09:47 AM


Thanks for the read, glad you liked it!
Lori

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