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Morning |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Always Amidst our happiness This sense of passing We cannot stop Only seemingly slow The going of the years The leaves on the tree Outside our window Have begun to change With a long gaze You make me sigh Through blue air A light rain Softly falls . |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
The leaves do tell the tale, do they not, Huan Yi? Enjoyed. ~ I like long walks, especially when they are taken by people who annoy me. ~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Through blue air A light rain Softly falls" Nice write. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
We cannot stop Only seemingly slow The going of the years I like this melancholy write very much! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Beautiful, John. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
With a long gaze You make me sigh Through blue air A light rain Softly falls Exquisite. M |
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