Open Poetry #47 |
Marquette |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Snow Is falling The whole world Is white and blue Water in a river Not yet frozen Flows under A wooden bridge In a long wool coat You walk in the park I reach out and take Your hand You close your eyes Your face beams light Who are we now In what paradise I don’t know Why we bother To talk at all . |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"I don’t know Why we bother To talk at all" Nice write!! JL |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful memory with a sad ending. The scenery made me think of some Russian novels ... M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds enticing...James |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like this alot. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you all John . |
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