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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
I am invisible. I stand in the corner and watch the world go by never thinking to jump in fore fear of getting hurt, Yes, It is a lonely stance to take, but at least I wont break should things fall apart. I am invisible. Do you want to talk? Sure. Who are you? I'll ask so as not to share who I truly am, Why? for who would want to know me because, I am invisible. Invisible is how I grew up with family and friends who drew the spotlight onto themselves, I content to stand in the shadows listening, observing, sharing thoughts only in my head, I'm invisible with groups of friends. Don't touch my defenses, you'll never see me again. I'm invisible, the only voice to this voiceless one is the written word with rose colored glasses and thoughts of my world in my head I've been invisible all my life until now. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
AH! And now I see you. I for one am very glad you decided to be visible. But I do understand where you came from. When you get to be my age… you just don’t care who can see you. It’s more fun to be visible.  I do enjoy your poetry. JL  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Powerful brushes to share your personality, dear Ebonygirl. We are all the principal performers of our lives and we are meant to be strong. Your sensitivity is an extra gift I would say. You are beautiful, step out into the light with your captivating poetry, fortify your wings and dare to fly. No one can hurt you unless you allow them to ... Excellent write. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms E...your pen is neon and bold....nude and with tattoos...invisible? no. Show us more please |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Breakout. Live the life even with the pain, it's not a bad thing. Keep pushing forward, with the attitude that you are invisible, therefore indestructible, can only be a winner. ~ Man who stands on toilet is high on pot. ~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
JL- Thank you for your kind words Margherita- Yes, we are meant to be strong. Thank you Dark- Thank you my friend JP2 - Thank you for your advice Ms. E |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Until now? That's a good sign then. Your poetry is lovely and sincere, I am glad you are here.  |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you Blues Serenade for your thoughtful response, Ms. E |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You are far from invisible, Edna. You are just coming into your own. Ida |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Our words make us visible... even those of us who were cellophane before. *S* |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you Ida, James and especially you Suthern for your words, Ms. E |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
beautifully written and very moving...i really like your writer's voice There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you Faithmariee, I appreciate your kind words, Ms. E |
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