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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-08-23 06:40 PM

Morning cool kisses my face
Breeze gently caresses my hair
my eyes close and face upturns
like to a lover respond

Essence awake to nature's embrace
inhales a deep breath primal
chilling in a thrill of shiver flesh
like to a lover respond

Opening to the warming sun
radiant blooms blossom
sweet upon my soul
like to a lover respond

LGR(C)8/23/11

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2011-08-23 07:06 PM

and sweetness upon the soul, this is.

There's a combination of innocence and sensuality to this...very well done, lovie.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-08-23 07:27 PM

You humble me with your praise, thank you.
Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2011-08-23 08:13 PM

You have become so damn good at this kind of poetry. It is sensuous with a heavy dab of love.

~ Man who stands on toilet is high on pot. ~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2011-08-23 08:14 PM

Very nice, my friend...really like "Opening to the warming sun radiant blooms blossom"

j.

Daddy Goose38
Member

since 2010-09-04

Posts 430
obama's a rice paper tiger

5 posted 2011-08-23 08:40 PM

... Like on the first mythic morning of Creation,
when everything was usoiled and new,
When I opened my eyes and knew that I was naked
and you taught me how to say your name.
Jaime

(writing while listening to a trashy talk show)

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2011-08-23 10:41 PM

Thanks Jerry, but could you please tell me what "kind" of poetry it is called that I write? I'd like to know what I'm good at.
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J. I sweated bullets over that line...thank you, thank you for liking it!
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Jaime, what a way cool thing to say. Sooo that's your motivational secret!

Lori

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2011-08-24 04:37 PM

Simply delightful, dear Lori.

Love,
Margherita

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

8 posted 2011-08-24 09:17 PM

Enjoyed your poem Lori,
Ms. E

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2011-08-24 09:30 PM

When heaven comes home,
Lori springs poetic.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

10 posted 2011-08-25 08:19 PM

why thank you ma'am
Lori

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

11 posted 2011-08-30 06:03 PM

I agree with serenity... a blend of innocence and sensuality... beautiful work!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

12 posted 2011-08-30 06:18 PM

Thanks for your vote! I appreciate your thoughts
Lori

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