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Open Poetry #47

Write the rest

tuffluv66
Member

since 2011-05-13

Posts 121
Iowa, U.S.A.

0 posted 2011-08-20 01:21 AM

Always wondering, what next,

will come around the bend?

Will it either tear me up

or help me to mend?

Is it something, I,

will be happy to see

or just something else to

scar me for, an eternity?

I plead so hard

just to find a new start,

to end this burden of sorrow

that placates my heart.

In the end, I'm always

on the edge of a cliff,

so full of fear,

my body, rigid and stiff.

Do I jump

and hope to fill in that void;

or do I pass it up

and hope to not end up annoyed?

I wish I could tell

which way I should go,

but in the end,

I never, ever seem to know.

So my heart leads me out

to where I look down,

if I miss this time,

there will be no rebound.

So here I go

stepping out into the wind,

hoping to fall into your arms,

in the end.

To lay there quietly,

no longer alone,

no longer will there be

sins for which to atone.

To be there, quietly,

your head upon my chest.

From this moment on,

together,

we'll write the rest.

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

1 posted 2011-08-20 01:38 AM

Heartfelt lovely poem, enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

~*~ To live is to love, to love is to live ~*~

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

2 posted 2011-08-20 04:45 AM

Fine writing.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2011-08-20 06:27 AM

quote:
So my heart leads me out

You will always know everything you need to know, when you follow your heart.

Very nice write.

M

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2011-08-20 05:02 PM

Excellent!

Enjoyed the read.

JL

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2011-08-20 11:04 PM

I really like this... and love the way it ends!

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