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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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slender trees cast shadows along the brim of your gaze I admire them touching your glances as if they were poetry being penned by a lack of sound...that music of silence a morning sun was light rain earlier when you woke whispering down across your charms with long fingers touching just the brim of your pores without entering you touched your lips to finger tips as if to keep a secret but left an unissued kiss there instead of word sounds and then a smile was born, slowly birthing, struggling freedom seemed to jump wide winged as almost laughter __________ daark |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
"... that music of silence" Sometimes that music can be heard by the poem in your eyes. Enjoyed, Ms. E |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms E...thank you for peeking into this window |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This touches foggy places with its Spanish Mossy ways, D.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Every line pushed this farther into my "favorites" category! *S* I love this, DS! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sweetsun Hmmmmm can see your lady tree wearing that. Thanks babe ________________ Ms suthern, anything you favor is blessed Thank you |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
slender trees cast shadows along the brim of your gaze I admire them touching your glances as if they were poetry being penned by a lack of sound...that music of silence a morning sun was light rain earlier when you woke whispering down across your charms with long fingers touching just the brim of your pores without entering you touched your lips to finger tips as if to keep a secret but left an unissued kiss there instead of word sounds and then a smile was born, slowly birthing, struggling freedom seemed to jump wide winged as almost laughter Whoever inspired this stunning poem brings out the best of you. I agree with Ruth. Every word a pearl, every line a row of pearls ... in its entirety it shines in poignant light. Love, M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you lady friend for the review and sigh song |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
freedom seemed to jump wide winged as almost laughter Like a freedom flyer ,,,,,,  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms king...thanks ms |
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