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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-08-16 06:53 PM

There was nothing else I could do.
If you were in my place
you'd have done the same
The longing and desire
was just too much
and I knew
it was only a matter of time
So I left him
as he slept
The cat and I went
out the door...
to the porch
and enjoyed the morning
waiting for him to wake up

LGR(C)8/16/11

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2011-08-16 06:58 PM

Love this tip toeing sentiment, and the visuals that come to mind in the morning sunrise.

Good good!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2011-08-16 07:25 PM

Who said opening lines couldn't be great teasers?

I'll bet the early sun saw the smile, too.

Now lay off the ciggies.

Daddy Goose38
Member

since 2010-09-04

Posts 430
obama's a rice paper tiger

3 posted 2011-08-16 08:44 PM

Dear Lori, How enigmatic this one is. In the opem are you drawn by desire or repelled?
Could you tell us a bit more?
But perhaps it is too painful and personal.
I confess, I am loving coming to know you a bit more with each poem.
I’m hungry and have to go. So sends tender addictive hugs.
Jaime

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2011-08-16 09:32 PM

Nice work.

~ I knew drugs weren't the answer. I just had to find out for myself. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2011-08-17 04:05 PM

Blues, I thank you kindly for your comments
____________________________________________
Gotcha Sunshine!
____________________________________________
Thanks Jerry

Lori

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

6 posted 2011-08-17 08:12 PM

Nice title to your nice poem,
Enjoyed,
Ms. E

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2011-08-17 09:47 PM

Ms.E did I throw you a curve ball too?

Lori

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2011-08-18 09:32 AM

Yeah, this I truly liked...

j.

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